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 Olivia Hyuga

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PostSubject: Olivia Hyuga   Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:55 pm

General
Appearance: Olivia averages at about 5'7, with shoulder length (dyed) blue hair that tends to cover one half of her face. As a member of the Hyuga Clan, she has the customary white eyes. She keeps to herself, wearing a thin dark jacket with a white shirt underneath and dark trousers.
Name: Hyuga Olivia
Alias: 'Doc'
Age: 14
Birthdate: September 1st
Height: 5'7
Weight: 120lbs

Personal
Personality: Olivia, raised in the Main House of clan Hyuga, was provided one of the best educations growing up, but always took an interest in biology. This lust for knowledge betrays her analytical personality. She will always think before acting, with few exceptions. As a medic, the thought of her companions getting hurt terrifies her, and she can be a little overbearing when it comes to someone's health. Of course, if someone does his this button of hers, a deep knowledge of the human body, paired with a Byakugan, can lead to precise savagery when she is angered.
History: Olivia was given the best education Konoha could provide, with her focus being biology and the medical arts. Everyone seemed to think that she would go on to become a doctor of some kind, off the front lines. She surprised everyone, however, when she enrolled in the ninja academy, looking to become a medic. Using her Byakugan and medical knowledge, with one hand she can help, and with the other destroy.
Mother: Hyuga Lian
Father: Hyuga Shen
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Lover:
Origin: Konoha
Clan/Bijuu: Hyuga Clan

Social
Village Affiliation: Konoha
Ryo: 500.
Word Pool: oooo

Equipment
Weapons: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai
Armor:
Items:

Shinobi Info
Ninja Rank/Status: Academy Student
Specialties:
EXP: 0

Stamina: 100
Chakra: 100
S.Energy: 50

Chakra Control:
Chakra Nature:
-Lightning
Affinities:

Combat Stats (Distribute 7 amongst these 5 stats)
Attack: 1
Strength: 1
Toughness: 1
Agility: 4
Speed: 3

Jutsu
Ninjutsu
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Taijutsu
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Genjutsu
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Kenjutsu
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Custom jutsu
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Doujutsu
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Kinjutsu
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Bloodline Jutsu
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Bijuu Jutsu
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Bloodline Bonus
-1.5 increase in pure chakra tecniques
-ability to read emotions by looking into someone's eyes


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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:24 pm

Alright, most of this looks pretty good, but I've just got a couple areas of concern.

1) You'll need to chose a chakra nature and apply it's bonuses to your stats. The chakra natures can be found here.

2) I just want to keep something clear with the history. There's a skill meant to represent basic medical knowledge (as well as others meant to represent advanced medical knowledge), that you'll need to acquire to really have the kind of medical knowledge you seem to be describing in Olivia's history.

At the least, I need you to address the chakra nature before approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Sun Jan 24, 2016 1:04 am

I fixed the affinity, but not sure how to proceed with the medical stuff. I could always remove the medical stuff and limit it to biology, but I do intend for her to become a squad medic at some point.

Also. She doesn't know any Healing Jutsu, just basic first aid.
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Sun Jan 24, 2016 10:10 am

Alright, you've added a nature, but you still need to add in the nature's bonuses for your stats. Since you've picked Lightning, you get an extra +2 to agility, and +1 to speed.

And you most certainly can become a medic, there's nothing saying you can't. I just want to be clear on what you're starting with.
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Sun Jan 24, 2016 2:45 pm

whoops. Added the stat boosts.
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Mon Jan 25, 2016 12:00 am

Cool, now there's just one last thing that I didn't catch the first time.

Your Byakugan can't see vitals and pressure points, yet. That's something you'll have to train up, but for at least the start, all your byakugan allows is the ability to read emotions by looking into someone's eyes. That last change though should be the last little thing before approval and you can start RPing.
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Mon Jan 25, 2016 12:58 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Olivia Hyuga   Mon Jan 25, 2016 1:11 am

Approved!

Here is the link to the approved bio: http://nindobeginning.forumotion.com/t193-hyuga-olivia#1317

You'll need that link for when you wish to update your character.
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